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[Nanya]

Well, I got this review (deleted it) from someone who didn't even BOTHER to leave a name.

Pathetic.

But, I've blocked all non-signed reviews on my fics because of it.

Story: Concession
Chapter: 1. Chapter 1

From: Anonymous ()
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Can you stop flooding our front page with your awful troll attempt?
What you're doing is against the rules, I'll report you if I see more
chapters as new fics.

 

[Ryo-Wolf]

Uh, posting multiple chapters as multiple stories is against the Fanfiction.net rules, you know. Assuming the admins even pay attention anymore, but I've seen accounts get axed for that in the past when they were more attentive.

 

[Nanya]

I'm working on getting some of it taken care of.

And by taken care of, I mean combine the stories and reviews.

 

[Tom_Badgerlock]

mmmh.....

Myself, i dislike most threesome, but more because they are usualy very badly depicted.

Also, i smile at Vivid being NanoFate family, when it has *loads* of hints of an absentee fate.

Fate having a "sleep-over" at nanoha's?

Check.

Fate not knowing basic things about vivio Erio and Caro do?

Check.

Fate first reflex is to speak to Erio and Caro (Deeper bond with them than with vivio)?

Check.

Nanoha having a cross mirage squirt gun?

Check.

Fate casually talking to second in the nude?

Check.

Nanoha and Fate being Described as "best friend"?

Check.

 

[Shiakou]

I think Concession was the best one of the three myself. Relationships was too much like a script fic and too crackish, Family was better but still too crackish. Concession on the other hand. . . it was definitely serious. Though the ending was still a bit awkward.

Besides, haven't these flamers heard of multiple stories within the same continuity? "The story of Nanoha telling her family about her relationship" is a distinct story from "The story of Fate telling her family about her relationship" even if they are part of the same continuity. (Hell, you could switch the chronological order between Relationships and Family and nothing would change.) Concession would count as a prequel to both but the genre, tone, and mood are so different that it's fair to call it another story.

It's like saying Fate/Stay Night, Fate/Hollow Ataraxia, and Fate/Zero are all just one game because they share a continuity.

In other words, only the most pedantic trolls or the most ignorant readers would even report you for "posting chapters of the same story as multiple stories".

 

[Nanya]

Well, to be fair, Relationships was just something we did for fun. *Chuckles* We got such a good response to it that we did Family and Concession.

 

[Shiakou]

Well, to be fair, Relationships was just something we did for fun. *Chuckles* We got such a good response to it that we did Family and Concession.

Oh, that explains it. Heh, and I'd love to see the look on those trolls' face when they realize their illusion of anonymity is gone.

*Shiakou takes a peek at Nanya's profile page*

. . . Damn it Nanya, two more stories already? There goes my plan to get off the Internet.

If I didn't know better I'd say you've been studying under Bpen on "how to write stories faster than rabbits makes babies".

 

[Nanya]

Well, to be fair, Relationships was just something we did for fun.á *Chuckles*á We got such a good response to it that we did Family and Concession.

Oh, that explains it. Heh, and I'd love to see the look on those trolls' face when they realize their illusion of anonymity is gone.

*Shiakou takes a peek at Nanya's profile page*

. . . Damn it Nanya, two more stories already? There goes my plan to get off the Internet.

If I didn't know better I'd say you've been studying under Bpen on "how to write stories faster than rabbits makes babies".

:rofl:

No, no...

Just that RadiantBeam and I click so well and get a lot done so fast.

... *Shifty shifty*

*Whistles innocently*

*Goes off to update "Day in the Life".*

Whoops! Left the html tags on. *Gets rid of them.* There we go.

 

[SotF]

Uh, posting multiple chapters as multiple stories is against the Fanfiction.net rules, you know. Assuming the admins even pay attention anymore, but I've seen accounts get axed for that in the past when they were more attentive.

When was that?

Can never remember that ever coming into play as its hard to figure out where people are actually writing a story with chapters or interlinked one shots.

Then there are the people who have, on occasion, written alternate chapters of their own stories that are divided off to keep from confusing people

 

[Chilord]

*Shrugs* from my Darkness Calling fic:

Sydonai
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Succubi and Incubi are THE SAME DAMNED THING!
There is no differance between them!
Same type of shapeshifting being in either male or female( or hermaphrodite) form.
And Morrigan is Bi, check the games/comics if you don't beleive me.

I kinda just.... stared at that when I got it.

 

[goldenarms]

*Shrugs* from my Darkness Calling fic:

Sydonai
2009-07-23 . chapter 1
Succubi and Incubi are THE SAME DAMNED THING!
There is no differance between them!
Same type of shapeshifting being in either male or female( or hermaphrodite) form.
And Morrigan is Bi, check the games/comics if you don't beleive me.

I kinda just.... stared at that when I got it.

...I'm pretty certain one is exclusively male and the other exclusively female, which kind of nixes the exact line. Maybe they've changed in light of the LGBT era.

Sex Demons For Equality!

 

[Garahs]

I don't know what setting the fic is from, but usually the only difference is the base gender. On everything else they're exactly the same. Incubi can take a female form and succubi can take a male form.

 

[Chilord]

Buffy/Darkstalkers cross over. *chuckles softly* And yes, they're the same, hence my going... :blink:

 

[clockworkchaos]

From my fic "Avatar: Last Firebender"

BY THE GODS!

YAY, AVATAR AZULA!

Payback's a **, yes? I want you to use THIS Quote at some point in a later update:

"To the world, I am the , . There are no longer any obsticles to my ambition. Today, as of this moment, the world is in my hands. commands you: Obey me, world!"

Obviously, that's a modified version of THIS Quote:

"To the world, I am the Emperor of the Holy Empire of Britannia, Lealouch Vi Britannia. Shneizel has kneeled before me. Damocles and F.L.E.J.A are both under my control. The Black Knights do not possess the power to fight against me anymore. However, if they insist on rebelling, I shall have you know the power of F.L.E.J.A. There are no longer any obsticles to my ambition. Today, as of this moment, the world is in my hands. Lealouch Vi Britannia commands you: Obey me, world!"

Do me this favor and I will cameo up to five of your OCs in my Avatar Fanfic, The Miracle Maker.

Did they even read past the title? Cause Azula is not the avatar. Not to mention the rest, which just makes me

:blink:

 

[goldenarms]

From my fic "Avatar: Last Firebender"

BY THE GODS!

YAY, AVATAR AZULA!

Payback's a **, yes? I want you to use THIS Quote at some point in a later update:

"To the world, I am the , . There are no longer any obsticles to my ambition. Today, as of this moment, the world is in my hands. commands you: Obey me, world!"

Obviously, that's a modified version of THIS Quote:

"To the world, I am the Emperor of the Holy Empire of Britannia, Lealouch Vi Britannia. Shneizel has kneeled before me. Damocles and F.L.E.J.A are both under my control. The Black Knights do not possess the power to fight against me anymore. However, if they insist on rebelling, I shall have you know the power of F.L.E.J.A. There are no longer any obsticles to my ambition. Today, as of this moment, the world is in my hands. Lealouch Vi Britannia commands you: Obey me, world!"

Do me this favor and I will cameo up to five of your OCs in my Avatar Fanfic, The Miracle Maker.

Did they even read past the title? Cause Azula is not the avatar. Not to mention the rest, which just makes me

:blink:

I like how he tries to butter up the deal by allowing some of your guys to cameo in his story.

 

[A_T_Sigma]

Q&A
2009-09-23 . chapter 2
To answer you question NO! i just don't like fics that have diary type sections in them so nope not that interested.

Good luck with your story

I have no words...seriously I don't....I can't even...

I do wish that people if you're gonna leave a reply like this sign in coward! :no:

and if you're not that interested, why the hell tell me anyway...actually why did you read the whole thing is beyond me...then have the nerve to say good luck... :rant:

/rant

 

[Nanya]

Here's one I got for my "Day in the Life" fic at 3 AM last night...

A new review/comment has been submitted to your story.

Story: Day in the Life
Chapter: 17. New Days

From: KAIBA ()
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suucks sucks sucks sucks

use your imagination, your intelligent, it won't hurt you. nanoha and fate
neveer would sleep whit yuuno.

first the guy is a loser, looks like a **

second: they are so beatifull, so powerfull, so...well you know how they are.
is disgusting make them so weak and living whit the ferret.

your story is just a polemic, soon or late the people will forget it...

thats good, is just one more story in the fandom.
go to another fandom, like... i don't know...ohí i do, neather...

 

[Mercsenary]

Here's one I got for my "Day in the Life" fic at 3 AM last night...

A new review/comment has been submitted to your story.

Story: Day in the Life
Chapter: 17. New Days

From: KAIBA ()
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suucks sucks sucks sucks

use your imagination, your intelligent, it won't hurt you. nanoha and fate
neveer would sleep whit yuuno.

first the guy is a loser, looks like a **

second: they are so beatifull, so powerfull, so...well you know how they are.
is disgusting make them so weak and living whit the ferret.

your story is just a polemic, soon or late the people will forget it...

thats good, is just one more story in the fandom.
go to another fandom, like... i don't know...ohí i do, neather...

sounds like someone is drunk and forgot how to use the english language. XD

your story is just a polemic.

^ lolwut?

 

[Legendary Legacy]

Well, apparently 'polemic' = A controversial argument, especially one refuting or attacking a specific opinion or doctrine.

How that pertains to Nanya's story, I'm honestly not sure. Though I'm a bit more curious as to what he was trying to say in his last sentence.

 

[Lord Raa]

Maybe he meant "Don't write ever again" ?

 

[Nanya]

Possibly.

But, oh well, we're having too much fun writing that fic.

 

[Dartz_IRL]

You, sir, are very likely a god of some type. This is an absolutely amazing story, and it would border on criminal to let it die, to leave it unfinished.
I am, to be perfectly honest, rather appalled that this has received only thirty reviews. The writing is excellent, and you've managed once again to make a self-insert character who not only avoids being a Mary-Sue, but is very much an interesting, likable character.
You, sir, are very likely a deity.

A deity eh?

And yet I still can't smite my neighbours.

 

[ellf]

Do review replies count for this? Putting this in anyway.

I reviewed using the following review:

I am of two minds about this fic. On the one hand I like Ranma, on the other hand I like Buffy both. However you seem to have an anti-Buffy bias. It's obvious from the way you are portraying her at this point in time...

Characterization issues are throughout this fic. The only person who seems in character at all is Faith, oddly enough. Ranma could go either way and I need to see more of him/her in order to figure it out.

Whenever you do a crossover of two universes of differing base power levels there are going to be issues regarding strength differences. I'm of the opinion that if people like Ranma exist, why would the Earth need the Slayer? Unless one of two things happened, A: There are things out there that only the Slayer can face and people like Ranma can not, B: people like Ranma are not numerous despite what the anime/manga seems to imply.

If the vampires were fledges... okay, I can see Ranma not having any trouble with them and defeating them rather easily. Minions in Buffy tend to not give even Xander much trouble after a while. Ranma needs to have some trouble defeating vampires before he will even see them as a threat, and the fact is, they are a threat. A minor one, but nonetheless a threat.

I do hope I'm wrong about your dislike of Buffy, but if you continue to portray her in a fashion that could be interpreted as bashing I'm going to have to not read this fic as I dislike bashfics. Please give her a fair treatment even though the pairing in this fic is obvious.

And the response?

I'm sorry, but I can't take your review very seriously.? Yes, there is a
little Buffy bashing.? This is merely an exageration of her personality.
It'll get better latter on.

As for most of the rest of your complaints, the uber-martial artists are
concentrated into small areas, not spread all over.

You accuse me of bashing Buffy while you bash Ranma?? For shame.? Ranma would
consider Vampires a threat just because they are a threat to others.

Also, I might not love Buffy, but I don't hate her.? If I were going to out
right bash someone, I'd give a warning or something.

You might say I'm a tad confused.

Fic in question is Giles' Child

 

[Yumeko-chan]

I'm all for flattery, but this... (from part 4 of my Farewell to Arms story):

Kiai
2006-12-25 . chapter 7
A very fitting end to a very awesome series of fiction. I enjoyed every chapter, melded with every character, and loved every facet of the story you crafted. I understand that time seems to slow when your working on something like this, and that things don't always go the way you want them to, or need them to for that matter. Maybe, just maybe though, you'll read this and appreciate your ability to write that much more.

Cut me an email or two, praise shouldn't be limited to a 10 letter block.

 

[Nanya]

Eh heh heh... I... Wow, this is some serious flattery here...

WAFF Addict wrote:

If you don't finish this story, I am going to cry myself to death, then come
back and haunt you. Seriously. It's just that amazing. I might almost say it's
better than canon-screw that, it SHOULD be canon!

*Chuckles* Guess I can't just drop "Day in the Life" now, huh?

Not that I was, I like writing on it.