Naruto Stories you wish you can destroy
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fg7dragon's The Otsusuki Transmigrant, where Harry Potter becomes immortal, gets the rinnegan and the mangekyo sharingan (or was it Kaguya's rinnesharingan? not that it matters), steals memories from both almost every powerful ninja AND WIZARD to have existed until that point and later puts Kaguya's mind in Ginny Weasley's body (since unlike in canon her soul was consumed by Tom despite Harry doing everything in canon by that point) so he got a teacher, steals protected magical animals so he doesn't have to train handsigns as much and gets a magical menagerie he can use for otherwise impossible weapons and to create philosopher stones until they don't fit his house, and performs sexual rituals that empower himself and the respectivelly sharingan'ed and rinnegan'ed Susan Bones and Luna Lovegood...
all completely reasonable actions to fight Voldemort and will totally not make the fight one-sided and boring
...currently reached the Skyrim level of the Triwizard Tourney. You know, the one where Harry is teleported to Skyrim, becomes a Dragonborn and sleeps and soulsucks his way through the story (you know, so he can get shouts without needing to kill dragons and kill dragons without the need to actually fight them to the death).
And it seems he will make the character play through not only the main story but also the main sidequests, and we get to watch everything. Joy.
No, I have no idea why I did not drop this pile of shit in the first chapters. This is not even a trainwreck to keep me entertained, it just sucks and sucks and is a terrible dark cloud in my browser that makes me stop reading until I force myself through it.
Is anyone really reading this that isn't suffering the same? This is not even wish-granting, it mixes so many things and makes up even more bullshit it doesn't even fit with itself.
all completely reasonable actions to fight Voldemort and will totally not make the fight one-sided and boring
...currently reached the Skyrim level of the Triwizard Tourney. You know, the one where Harry is teleported to Skyrim, becomes a Dragonborn and sleeps and soulsucks his way through the story (you know, so he can get shouts without needing to kill dragons and kill dragons without the need to actually fight them to the death).
And it seems he will make the character play through not only the main story but also the main sidequests, and we get to watch everything. Joy.
No, I have no idea why I did not drop this pile of shit in the first chapters. This is not even a trainwreck to keep me entertained, it just sucks and sucks and is a terrible dark cloud in my browser that makes me stop reading until I force myself through it.
Is anyone really reading this that isn't suffering the same? This is not even wish-granting, it mixes so many things and makes up even more bullshit it doesn't even fit with itself.
I was bored and looking for any new fics that would interest me. I didn't even notice the author...
The summary had potential if done right, in my opinion. I personally have a soft spot for Kaguya despite her coming totally out of left field at the eleventh hour, been waiting for the new filler featuring her.
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It was FAR from done right...
The summary had potential if done right, in my opinion. I personally have a soft spot for Kaguya despite her coming totally out of left field at the eleventh hour, been waiting for the new filler featuring her.
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It was FAR from done right...
That weird feel of disgust and exasperation when a reader of your story seems to also like the likes of Kyuubi16... Well, can't say he likes him, he just commented he would expected someone like him or someone called Red Reaper to forget details of their stories because they wrote so many.
I agree that it is a bit unprofessional, but being compared with Kyuubi16, if he is not a fan of his, is a low blow.
And if he is, I worry about my writing since he is one of my most active reviewers.
But again, half of his messages are either asking for future plans or saying what he thinks should happen because it was done so in another fic I did not enjoy so much (in some of them I thought they were REALLY bad), so I should have seen the warning signs.
I agree that it is a bit unprofessional, but being compared with Kyuubi16, if he is not a fan of his, is a low blow.
And if he is, I worry about my writing since he is one of my most active reviewers.
But again, half of his messages are either asking for future plans or saying what he thinks should happen because it was done so in another fic I did not enjoy so much (in some of them I thought they were REALLY bad), so I should have seen the warning signs.
I've had similar problems with people telling me I should do something in my fics because they were done in other fics that they liked. Don't get me wrong, most of my early work (and some of my current work) is pretty bad. Not Kyuubi16 bad, but bad all the same, and I'm always open to suggestions. But the main suggestion given is to turn non-harem fics into Harem fics. I can only imagine Kyuubi16 is high up on the favs list of those people.
We had a chuckle a few years back (the search engine works pretty good so you can probably find it too) in this very same topic I think about the reviews on the first few chapters of A Fox with a Dog's Fang where the author said he wasn't going to pair Naruto and Hinata, and several of the reviewers practically BEGGED him to ship the two
(There's an old and a new version of the story, this is from the old one)
To wit, a review of chapter two;
(There's an old and a new version of the story, this is from the old one)
To wit, a review of chapter two;
This may seem a bit odd, but anything by Jiraiya's Dream. It's not that his fics are badly written, but that they're terribly characterized. He's one of those authors that just use "Naruto" as a generic, angsty stand in for OC's, because he knows he wouldn't get nearly as many reviews, although I doubt he'd admit it.
Replaced is admittedly the worse of the two, since it's just Naruto being a needlessly dramatic angsty douche, because Rias and Akeno like Issei more than him. The guy just does not get Naruto's character, and tries to needlessly justify why "Naruto" acts nothing like Naruto. Even Sasuke isn't as bad as NINO is.
Replaced is admittedly the worse of the two, since it's just Naruto being a needlessly dramatic angsty douche, because Rias and Akeno like Issei more than him. The guy just does not get Naruto's character, and tries to needlessly justify why "Naruto" acts nothing like Naruto. Even Sasuke isn't as bad as NINO is.
Most things by Bones Boy are horribly characterized and have Naruto as a NINO. I think the only one of his stories I like in the guilty pleasure kinda way is his Aphrodite Naruto and even then it's more because I have yet to find a good crossover with Percy Jackson.
But his Apollo Naruto especially ticks me off, Naruto is so outpfcharacter in it.
Link is down below
https://m.fanfiction.net/u/2541799/BonesBoy15
But his Apollo Naruto especially ticks me off, Naruto is so outpfcharacter in it.
Link is down below
https://m.fanfiction.net/u/2541799/BonesBoy15