I might as well reveal it now. The couple that owned the store in chapter 4 are expys of Tron and Megaman from Megaman legend. I kinda plan on having their back story be that they had a few adventures with Haruka and Seta in the past.
I was a bit upset at the time at learning Megaman Legends 3 was cancelled.
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Should I have Mutsumi confront Tomoko when Mutsumi learns of Tomoko's secret?
I figure that would end up being an argument of sorts.
Mutsumi argues that putting Keitaro and Naru together would be helpful to the both of them. Keitaro gets the goal that he was seeking for most of his life and Naru breaks out of her 'all men are perverts' shell and winds up with a good man.
Tomoko would argue that Naru would benefit more with having Keitaro as a close friend and the goals that we have in the beginning if life don't always wind up being the goals we achieve in the end. Or point out that Keitaro technically completed the goal he set out to, being Tokyo University with Naru. Anything else was a bonus.
If anyone has any ideas to improve it on either side, please tell me. I'd like to make an argument that sorta ends on a stalemate for the reader to decide who is right.
But I do plan on putting that meeting off for a few chapters, so take your time.
I was a bit upset at the time at learning Megaman Legends 3 was cancelled.
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Should I have Mutsumi confront Tomoko when Mutsumi learns of Tomoko's secret?
I figure that would end up being an argument of sorts.
Mutsumi argues that putting Keitaro and Naru together would be helpful to the both of them. Keitaro gets the goal that he was seeking for most of his life and Naru breaks out of her 'all men are perverts' shell and winds up with a good man.
Tomoko would argue that Naru would benefit more with having Keitaro as a close friend and the goals that we have in the beginning if life don't always wind up being the goals we achieve in the end. Or point out that Keitaro technically completed the goal he set out to, being Tokyo University with Naru. Anything else was a bonus.
If anyone has any ideas to improve it on either side, please tell me. I'd like to make an argument that sorta ends on a stalemate for the reader to decide who is right.
But I do plan on putting that meeting off for a few chapters, so take your time.