Ranma ½ I just saw this fic and I hate this about it!
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I hope you are referring to your own fic,
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Just found it. I'm too tired to read it now, but ... well, as mentioned by others, it's not curing Ranma that's the problem. (Or at least, not the only problem). Rather, if he just "gets" a cure without any effort, THAT's an issue.
Also an issue if he gains any "godly" powers, but can't cure his curse. That's hypocrisy right there!
And I don't think this is a "new turn" for us. I've been under the impression that a lot of us feel this way for a very long time now.
-chronodekar
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Just found it. I'm too tired to read it now, but ... well, as mentioned by others, it's not curing Ranma that's the problem. (Or at least, not the only problem). Rather, if he just "gets" a cure without any effort, THAT's an issue.
Also an issue if he gains any "godly" powers, but can't cure his curse. That's hypocrisy right there!
And I don't think this is a "new turn" for us. I've been under the impression that a lot of us feel this way for a very long time now.
-chronodekar
meh, i liked it because your 'cure' is not a cheap solution but a worse curse, OTOH i really felt that you wanted to do much in the post LH part of the fic and for me it became Meh... so many plots that you could have finished (or are derailed by the ew things going on) like the resolution with Shinobu, a real breakup between Naru and Ranma, Chao, Eva, Mana's mindwipe.
and then the introduction of things that do not make sense (yet..) like Saffron, the interaction with Kiima, the Terminator-like Ranma Jr. and the 'promise/wish/curse' made by Otohime.
so honestly i'll just wait until it's finished and then i'll read it if i can be arsed to to it.
and then the introduction of things that do not make sense (yet..) like Saffron, the interaction with Kiima, the Terminator-like Ranma Jr. and the 'promise/wish/curse' made by Otohime.
so honestly i'll just wait until it's finished and then i'll read it if i can be arsed to to it.
This one's simply horrible
Things wrong with this fic apart from the usual clichÚs?
Ranma is part Juraian (from Nodoka's side; how original), part saiyan, and he might be a Jinchuuriki (of course, well... why not. After all while the author's already at it Ranma could also be related to Belldandy, Hild, or maybe even Galactus, or the Flying Spaghetti Monster).
Ranma gets 14 girls (of which he doesn't know a single one except the Tendo sisters) witout any logic exdept for the author's twisted fantasy (At the end of the chapter Tsunade says that apparently the girls don't mind sharing). Honestly, I can't see how these pairings are supposed to work or why they would be willing to share.
Paitings in this fic:
Of course there's the OC who's your typical Gary-Stu. Below are the statistics and other information about Ranma and the OC. No idea how Ranma is supposed to measure up to the OC.
Stats of the OC :lonegunman: :flameon: :headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger:
EDIT: If he's a Super Saiyan, why would he need the other skills? Wanna bet that his unknown sister is the author's avatar?
Things wrong with this fic apart from the usual clichÚs?
Ranma is part Juraian (from Nodoka's side; how original), part saiyan, and he might be a Jinchuuriki (of course, well... why not. After all while the author's already at it Ranma could also be related to Belldandy, Hild, or maybe even Galactus, or the Flying Spaghetti Monster).
Ranma gets 14 girls (of which he doesn't know a single one except the Tendo sisters) witout any logic exdept for the author's twisted fantasy (At the end of the chapter Tsunade says that apparently the girls don't mind sharing). Honestly, I can't see how these pairings are supposed to work or why they would be willing to share.
Paitings in this fic:
Of course there's the OC who's your typical Gary-Stu. Below are the statistics and other information about Ranma and the OC. No idea how Ranma is supposed to measure up to the OC.
Stats of the OC :lonegunman: :flameon: :headbanger: :headbanger: :headbanger:
EDIT: If he's a Super Saiyan, why would he need the other skills? Wanna bet that his unknown sister is the author's avatar?
THAT .... summary, makes me want to drag the story out to the backyard, tie it to a tree and shoot it in the rear a few times, before moving to the front to finish the beast off.
And then, throwing the carcass at the author who spawned it. Or, if I'm feeling really nasty, force-feed it to him/her.
As NDF would say, "Ugh!"
-chronodekar
And then, throwing the carcass at the author who spawned it. Or, if I'm feeling really nasty, force-feed it to him/her.
As NDF would say, "Ugh!"
-chronodekar
Hmmm... confusing, Belldandy is a rep for the *Rival* Relief Office, decided to pull a guy from apparently reality into heaven, give him a *prerecoreded* but *interactive* message, cheerfully telling his of massive failures and deaths occuring, and to go out and find one of three parts of a stolen core of Yggrasil...
Hmmm... listed as Ranma crossover, but no Ranma yet, I'm to assume that will be the first world sent to.
Hmmm... listed as Ranma crossover, but no Ranma yet, I'm to assume that will be the first world sent to.
I'm neutral on that particular point.
I'm much more apprehensive when the summary contains these kind of sentences:
"I know my summary sucks but the story is great".
Usually they add "Trust me" which is usually a very bad sign.
"My story sucks but I hope you'll enjoy it anyway".
"'What if...? What if...? What if...?"
I'm much more apprehensive when the summary contains these kind of sentences:
"I know my summary sucks but the story is great".
Usually they add "Trust me" which is usually a very bad sign.
"My story sucks but I hope you'll enjoy it anyway".
"'What if...? What if...? What if...?"