Naruto The Narutoversity

Land of Water v3 and the Hidden Mist (Knyght)

Knyght

The Collector
Land of Water v3 and the Hidden Mist (Official Version)

This is an island country floating on the eastern ocean of the continent that is completely surrounded by water. It consists of one central island occupied by steep mountains in the middle of several smaller islands with hundreds of little ones between them. Each of the main islands have their own traditions that their citizens stubbornly insist in preserving to this day, creating a very unique culture. Many of the islands are uncharted and home to all kinds of wildlife, terrain and weather conditions.

The Civil Wars

The country was once subject to countless civil wars as the islanders treated each other as enemies instead of fellow countrymen. Divided from the mainland by the sea, they were far more concerned with their own interests than that of the rest of the world. They hired shinobi clans to go to war with one another; ninjas would be given missions to sink their ships, raid their businesses and destroy their home in an ever-escalating blood feud between islands. Where the other nations typically used shinobi to fight against other nations in their struggle for dominance, the islands were officially all meant to be one nation which made their warring more senseless and brutal than most.

Among the ninja clans that fought in these wars, it was the ones who possessed kekkei genkai that were naturally the most highly desired. Blessed with prodigious talent and unique powers essentially from birth, they fought countless battles against each other and every other shinobi clan, causing untold devastation across every island to carry out their missions.

The bone wielding Kaguya Clan terrified any who saw them tear their own bones from their bodies to wield as weapons and leap into battle with ecstatic bloodlust. The acid breathing Ashido Clan turned any battlefield they stood on into a desolate wasteland and leaving behind bodies too corroded to identify. And the ice-making Yuki Clan turned the abundant waters of the nation against its own people as they coated vast swatches of land in ice and shattered anyone caught in their path.

These three clans were the most powerful weapons used in any of the wars. But the magnitude of their success had a terrible impact on their reputation.

Everyone who ever suffered at their hands despised them and anyone who used them grew to fear them. This led to tales of the kekkei genkai clans being bringers of misfortune who were responsible for the civil war themselves, working to destabilize the country and profit from its death. The populace began to turn against these clans entirely as they became the scapegoats of the entire conflict, refusing their services, cutting off their supplies and attacking their people and homes.

The Founding

It was the news of the strongest ninja clans, the Senju and the Uchiha, had united spreading like wildfire across the continent that changed the status quo in the Land of Water as they scrambled to match this village of shinobi. Thus the feudal lord was convinced to allow the ninja clans to become the main military force of his nation and the Village Hidden in the Mist was built on its central island.

The Hidden Mist was immediately used as a tool to bring an end to the civil wars that had constantly plagued their country. With the feudal lord's blessing, the hidden village took the offensive against his enemies to violently quell any rebellion and bring all of the islands under their control. It helped gather more ninja clans to their cause with the visible evidence of their might and soon established it as one of the Five Great Hidden Villages.

Naturally, the widespread resentment against the kekkei genkai clans made them prime targets as the hidden village was used to bring them to order. By the time the civil wars came to an end, the kekkei genkai clans had been all but decimated. What remained of the Ashido and Yuki clans chose to go into hiding, disguising the truth of their origins and blending into the rest of the population for the sake of survival. It helped to ensure the continuation of their bloodline as their descendant throughout the nature would inherit their power - which would unfortunately lead to many being killed when their heritage was discovered - but the clans themselves had essentially come to an end. The Kaguya chose another path where they chose to retreat from the world without splitting apart as their savage nature meant that the idea of disbanding and become civilians was anathema to them. They instead became something like bandits who took on bloody missions from those willing to pay for their services but otherwise ravaged the land to keep themselves alive.

The Mizukages

The founder of the Hidden Mist was the First Mizukage Byakuren. The man had earned a legendary reputation in his long life. He was famous for forging seven magnificent swords with unique abilities that he wielded in battle himself, and for the experience and skill he had gained from living far past the average life expectancy of a ninja. His legendary status and prowess in battle is what allowed him to unite the ninja clans under his banner. He was a stern individual who believed that he could make his hidden village the strongest on the continent, pushing forward ruthlessly effective policies to raise the level of his shinobi into something to be feared. And he was a key figure in Kiri's role of ending the civil wars and making the hidden village recognized as one of the strongest on the continent, though the country's location and his intolerant attiude caused them to have only distant relations with other countries.

Byakuren took on seven disciples of the most skilled swordsmen from across the country for the sake of teaching each one to wield on his seven blades. When he died during the First Shinobi World War, these seven disciples each took one of his swords and went on to become the infamous Seven Ninja Swordsmen of the Mist.

The Second Mizukage was Hoozuki Gengetsu, the most powerful member of the clan of water shapeshifters. His mastery of their hijutsu manifested as water with an oily consistency and his infinite explosion ninjutsu, as well as genjutsu that very few were ever capable of seeing through, let alone breaking. His nomination was almost surprising in how rapidly he went from being a relative unknown to gaining immense popularity through his magnetic charisma and the clever tactics he utilized in the war. Unfortunately, his enmity towards the Second Tsuchikage culminated in a battle that killed them both.

His successor was the right-hand man of the First Mizukage, Shikaemon Saizou. He was originally slated to become the Second but was passed over in light of Gengetsu’s rapid rise to fame. Saizou’s most famous act as the Third Mizukage was leading an offensive against the Village Hidden in the Eddies and the Uzumaki Clan who had earned a fearsome reputation for their fuuinjutsu in the first two world wars.

The Third Shinobi World War saw the Fourth Mizukage Yagura rise to power. He was the son of the Three-Tailed Jinchuuriki and a once-in-a-generation child prodigy with an incredible affinity for water ninjutsu. It’s believed that the Tailed Beast influenced his innate talent at the cost of stunting his physical growth which plagued him with a child-like appearance even into adulthood. The scar on his left cheek was left by his own father when he lost control and left a wound imbued with corrosive chakra that resisted medical ninjutsu. He was elevated to the position of Kage while still in his teens as his abilities made him highly respected in his home village and equally feared by their enemies. Unfortunately, the Fourth Mizukage's reign became known as the darkest period in the Hidden Mist's history.

The Bloody Mist

Upon the Fourth Mizukage's selection, he used the war to significantly increase the rate of conscription among the country's populace. The village was flooded with potential shinobi, especially those who had been orphaned by the war and had no other prospects, who would be trained under a new academy curriculum. The training was soon said to be effective but brutal, designed to rapidly create effective fighters more than anything with the intention that their later education would compensate for their weaknesses.

The most infamous aspect of this was the new graduation test that was only revealed at the end of the first academic year that Yagura was in office. Every aspiring shinobi at the ninja academy needed to kill one of their classmates in one-on-one combat to graduate. It was for the sake of ensuring that only the strongest students would prosper, providing their worth in love combat and ensuring that any mist-nin would be capable of the most ruthless of acts for the sake of the village. The ritual worked and the next generation of shinobi quickly gained a fearsome reputation on the battlefield; news of the ritual itself horrified the world to the extent that the village became known as the Bloody Mist.

Naturally, such merciless changes in Kiri meant that there was an increase in the number of missing-nin the village produced. Many of these were people who had lost family to the graduation ritual or were afraid of their children participants or were going to be participants themselves. In response to this, Yagura dedicated a regiment of Kiri’s Anbu to tracking and executing these individual which he named the Hunter Corps - also called the Undertaker Squad by some - who held the duty of destroying their bodies to protect the village’s secrets. The Hunter Corps were soon feared by the rogue ninja but they gained an unfortunate reputation for the collateral damage and innocent lives lost in their pursuit as well.

This test only came to an end when Momochi Zabuza, a nine year old boy who would become the Demon of the Hidden Mist, killed over a hundred students before he had even received any ninja training. He was graduated immediately and was placed on a genin team with one of the students who had killed their partner and survived the massacre, Terumii Mei. It was this very act that would inspire her to become Mizukage and change what the Hidden Mist had become. The drastic loss in potential manpower meant that the practice needed to be discontinued.

The Real Mizukage

The unstable nature of the Hidden Mist is what made it a target for Uchiha Madara and, later, Uchiha Obito.

Madara infiltrated the village and manipulated the leadership into an audacious plan to use the currently unsealed Three-Tailed Turtle against Konoha. Under his unseen influence, Kiri kidnapped one of the Yellow Flash’s students, Nohara Rin, when he was on a mission and sealed the Tailed Beast inside him. They allowed her to escape when her teammate, Hatake Kakashi, came to rescue her and sent a contingent of shinobi to chase her back to Konoha. The plan was for Rin to return to Konoha unaware of her prisoner where the seal would automatically be released, releasing the Three-Tails inside the enemy village to unleash untold destruction. It would mean the loss of one of their Tailed Beasts but it would undoubtedly cause irreparable damage to Konoha before it was sealed away or drive off.

However Rin learned of what had been done to her during her imprisonment and forced Kakashi to kill her before she could return to Konoha. Uchiha Obito witnessed her death and, before the mist-nin could potentially retrieve the beast before it died along with its host, massacred the entire group.

Fortunately, the Three-Tails revived within a short amount of time and was immediately captured by Kiri once more. But instead of sealing it inside a child as was normal, Yagura, who was the most compatible with its chakra due to his heritage, chose to become its next jinchuuriki. And in a turn of events that no-one else foresaw, he gained completely mastery of its power.

Confident in his strength as the Fourth Mizukage, Yagura confronted the Tailed Beast directly in a contest over its chakra and actually emerged victorious. He subjugated the creature and stole the majority of its chakra for himself, allowing him to train with its power without its willful influence. Unknown to him, he had followed a similar path to Killer B in gaining control of its chakra yet Yagura never became partners with Isobu and they remained hostile to one another. But his mastery of its abilities meant that he became recognized worldwide as a perfect jinchuuriki too.

After the war ended, though Kiri ceased any overt acts of aggression against the other villages it never officially made peace with the others. This, coupled with the fear they had garnered during the war, severely damaged the village's diplomatic relations with the world worse than ever before.

Yagura’s negative relationship with his Tailed Beast was actually what allowed Uchiha Obito to exploit them. Obito avoided a direct confrontation by ambushing the Fourth Mizukage, crushing his will with the hypnotic influence of his Mangekyou Sharingan as he had been taught by Uchiha Madara. With neither Yagura nor Isobu protecting the other from genjutsu, both were overcome by Obito and became subject to his control. And so the Hidden Mist itself fell under his control as well.

Controlling the Hidden Mist helped steadily destroy one of the Five Great Hidden Villages and make the continent less capable of defending itself without one of its most powerful cornerstones. It helped induce the paranoia of other villages over its unpredictable actions which could end up leading to further war. And it kept two of the Tailed Beast’s under his control while poisoning the reputation of Jinchuuriki even further as the world witnessed Yagura’s actions, something that led to the Seven-Tailed Jinchuuriki Utakata being despised by many up until his own death. The only mist-nin who learned who was really in charge was Hoshigaki Kisame as Obito recognized a kindred spirit and powerful tool, revealing himself as "Uchiha Madara" who divulging the Moon's Eye Plan.

Under Obito’s influence, Yagura showed an increasing paranoia and descent into madness as he started to tear his own nation apart. His citizens became subject to heavily increased surveillance, crimes rates rose as law enforcement grew increasingly short staffed, seemingly loyal shinobi were interrogated under questionable evidence and relationship between ninja and civilian deteriorated more than ever.

One particularly ill-conceived mission ended up provoking the increasingly volatile Kaguya Clan. Their response was an all-out assault on Kiri where every man, woman and child capable of fighting broke through the village’s defenses and started the slaughter the entire populace. Armed with a lifetime of bloodlust and the incredible bodies granted by their kekkei genkai, they committed a terrible massacre before the clan could be brought down. The event was later known as the Kaguya Kamikaze.

The only survivor of the suicidal charge was its youngest and most talented member, Kimimaro, who was unintentionally hidden under the bodies of his dead kin and successfully escaped the village. Unable to survive alone, he was rescued by Orochimaru of the Legendary Sannin who had his own plans for the child. Even the Kaguya who had remained behind - the ones who were too old or too young - were hunted down and slaughtered to the lost. And while the bloodline still lives on in those who had left the clan during the past century, the Kaguya Clan itself was finally extinct.

The Next Era

Yagura’s actions had made him increasingly suspicious to certain members of the village. Terumii Mei was one of those.

She had suffered great stigma for her twin kekkei genkai, Boil Release and Lava Release, yet she had risen above all that in her impressive career and had garnered the admiration and respect of many of her fellow shinobi. She was a symbol for those who had discovered that they had descended from the kekkei genkai clans as well such as Chuukichi, with parents or grandparents who had been among those and had gone into hiding after the civil wars, and many of them gathered around her.

Mei had always been against the Fourth Mizukage’s brutal policies but she still believed that he had acted for the sake of protecting the village and making it stronger. However his actions in the past few years had only ever caused the village more harm.

Mei shared her suspicions with Ao of the Hunter Corps who used his Byakugan - one he had torn from one of the Hyuuga before killing them in the Third Shinobi World War - to observe Yagura directly. This careful examination revealed that Yagura was under a powerful genjutsu which was manipulating his actions under someone else’s control for an unknown length of time. With this discovery, Mei galvanized the mist-nin to join her in a uprising against the Fourth Mizukage to free the Hidden Mist of his tyranny. Manipulating events to get him outside the village to avoid immense collateral damage and prevent any loyalist enforcement, Mei led an ambush against Yagura with the rebel fighters and together they overcame his full strength.

Upon his death, Mei was selected to become the Fifth Mizukage and she immediately worked to bring enlightment to the hidden village and push it away from its bloodstained past. Tired of the infighting and ruthlessness of the Bloody Mist, many ninja were happy with the idea of change. She focused on rebuilding the damage to the village's infrastructure, reworking the academy curriculum and even granted amnesty to the shinobi who went rogue during Yagura's reign as she recognized that many of them had only left because of his extremist policies.

However there were still some who believed in the old regime and that Mei was destroying what made their village great. The most powerful of those traditionalists were the last and stronest generation of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen.

Without Yagura as his puppet, Obito believed that Hoshigaki Kisame would better serve away from the village. His final orders were to wreak havoc for the government which he fulfilled by assassination several important nobles and even killing the daimyo of the Land of Water, an event which had a terrible backlash on the relationship between Kiri and the country's rulers. This act had him immediately labeled an S-rank criminal and forced to escape the country where he soon joined Akatsuki. He was the first of many of the Seven Ninja Swordsmen to go rogue.

The most notable of these was the Fifth Mizukage's old teammate, Momochi Zabuza. He abandoned the village with his apprentice Haku for several years with the intention of building up money and allies to take the title of Mizukage for himself. He returned and launched a coup d'etat against Mei which ended in bitter failure and forced him to spend the next year on the run until he met his death in the Land of Waves.

The only Swordsmen to remain with the village was Hoozuki Mangetsu. He had a bloodthirsty personality that made him feared by many, but he was genuinely loyal to Kiri and believed that Mei was the best ruler they could have at the time. He also believed that men like him and his equally murderous brother Suigetsu would be needed even with the direction she was planning to take the village. And as the only one who had proven capable of wielding all seven swords, hunting down the rest of the Swordsmen would allow him to monopolize the weapons for him and his brother who wished to become one as well. Unfortunately, his ambitions came to an end midway when an ambush by the Hidden Sound ended his life and his swords were taken by Orochimaru as a part of his collection of rare weaponry.

Only the Hiramekerai, already passed down to Chojurou, remained the village. Suigetsu chose to abandon the village after his brother's death to find the lost swords and then rebuild the Seven Ninja Swordsmen as an independent organisation with himself as the leader.

But despite the many setbacks, Kiri flourished under the Fifth Mizukage's rule. The latest generation of shinobi were raised without living through the upheaval that had plagued their home in recent years. Today, Terumii Mei has helped her hidden village rise above its bloody past and she is the most loved and respected Mizukage to date.
 
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Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

So Yagura was already a cruel and merciless tyrant even before Obito took control of him, huh? That's not exactly the impression I got of him when Naruto spoke with him in the manga, but I suppose that wasn't enough conversation to make a real judgement call on him.

I have a personal theory that Yagura wasn't actually a perfect jinchuuriki and had never succeeded in taking Isobu's chakra for himself. He only appeared to be a perfect jinchuuriki because Obito took control of both him and Isobu and forced them to work together.

Do you think that the person(s) who ambushed and killed Mangetsu and the remaining rogue Swordsmen may have been Orochimaru and/or his underlings? Cause Kabuto did summon all the Swordsmen as zombies and also somehow acquired most of the swords to equip them with.
 

Knyght

The Collector
RE: The Naruversity

Kiri was known as a Bloody Mist before Obito ever got involved and that period is associated with Yagura so he must have been quite a character all on his own. I think of him as someone with a genial manner in day-to-day interactions (such as his talk with Naruto) but is quite cold-blooded when it comes to leadership (his reign as Mizukage).

I deliberately went in the opposite direction of that theory. Yagura's already got the short stick by being Obito's puppet and ruining his village so taking away his only known accomplishment as a (semi-)perfect jinchuuriki and attributing it to Obito as well just rubbed the wrong way for me.

I did think of Orochimaru killing Mangetsu but a part of me was just like "Orochimaru again? Really?" At the very least, I could get behind the idea that he tracked down the remaining swords, killing the ones who took them, as a part of his desire to collect special weapons like his Kusanagi and the Totsuka. Kidnapping Suigetsu seems like enough for his involvement with them and it'd be odd - though not implausible - that he never learned that Orochimaru killed his brother.
 

Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

Yeah it is pretty ridiculous how many bad thing in this manga can be traced back to Orochimaru, but still... I was just thinking that Orochimaru killing Mangetsu would make a lot of sense. Because it would explain how he gained possession of most of the swords (Mangetsu was carrying most of them in that special scroll) and why he was so interested in reverse engineering the Hydrification Technique in the first place; that is, he was impressed by Mangetsu's usage of it during their battle.
 
Kidoumaru’s Clan (Knyght)

Knyght

The Collector
Decided to expand what I'd written for one of the quirkier members of the Sound Five.

Kidoumaru’s Clan

Kidoumaru of the Sound Five is a descendant of the Tsuchigumo Clan.

They were a ninja clan from a remote, forested region of the continent. Those very forests were home to many different breeds of spiders, including ones that are much larger than any human and just as intelligent. The clan and the spiders developed a symbiotic relationship with one another as they lived together.

The Tsuchigumo studied the spiders; their movements, their habits and their biology. All for the purpose of emulating them to gain any edge over their enemies. They developed ninjutsu which could alter their bodily fluids to create two different kinds of substances; elastic threads to copy a spider’s webbing and golden metal to copy their chitin.

But the Tsuchigumo took their specialty to lengths that few other clans were willing to go to. They performed a forbidden ninjutsu upon themselves that drastically modified their bodies to more closely resemble real spiders, growing two extra pair of arms and a third eye. These physical traits were passed down to their descendants and cemented their legacy.

Those extra limbs gave them an inhuman level of dexterity which they took advantage of to weave their webbing and more avenues to attack with taijutsu that many enemies just weren’t able to compensate for. And their third eye extends the range of their vision to see over great distances with a higher level of perception.

The clan were renowned for their archery skills as they could not only pinpoint their target from far out of normal eye-shot but could actually hit them using their combined strength of their limbs. Even the era of hidden village where bows and arrows became increasingly archaic, they continued to train this skill.

Unfortunately, the Tsuchigumo were one of those clans unable to join a hidden village in no small part to their physical mutations. They became a clan of wandering ninja that only managed to survive for a few more generations before they were broken by war.

Kidoumaru was its youngest survivor who chose to honor his family by pursuing power upon the command of the Legendary Sannin's Orochimaru.
 
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Sages and Senjutsu (Research Notes) (Knyght)

Knyght

The Collector
Another list for another difficult subject.

Sages and Senjutsu (Version 1)
Haven't searched for anything related to Six Paths Senjutsu yet.
 
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RE: The Naruversity

I think it was also mentioned somewhere that the enzymes he produces are what lets Juugo use senjutsu while moving?
 

Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

I'm pretty sure what Kabuto meant was that Orochimaru couldn't use Sage Mode like he and Naruto can. Orochimaru obviously can use senjutsu to at least some degree if he put some of it into his cursed seals. His body probably just isn't powerful enough to hold a large enough amount of the stuff for proper physical enhancement.

My headcanon explanation is that Orochimaru's original body was strong enough to maintain Sage Mode (how else could he have learned how to balance nature energy in the first place?) but he lost that ability after using his immortality jutsu because none of his host bodies to date have been strong enough for it. This is why he invented the cursed seal, to help him find a proper host body; the cursed seal level 2 form is a corrupted form of sage mode, so anyone who can master the cursed seal and use that power is also strong enough for a proper sage mode. Orochimaru therefore wanted Kimimaro and Sasuke's bodies as much for the proven compatibility with sage mode as for their bloodline limits.
 

Knyght

The Collector
RE: The Naruversity

Yorae Rasante said:
I think it was also mentioned somewhere that the enzymes he produces are what lets Juugo use senjutsu while moving?
No, it was that Orochimaru created a special enzyme from Juugo's bodily fluids which he uses in the cursed seal.

(how else could he have learned how to balance nature energy in the first place?)
I was thinking that it could be because of the method which the White Snake Sage uses to give people senjutsu. Since he didn't complete his reincarnation ninjutsu until he had left the village and Anko has a senjutsu-filled cursed seal, he must have first learned with his original body yet we're told by Kabuto that his body couldn't tolerate it. My thought was that Orochimaru had a strong enough body to withstand the snake's natural energy bite but then could never create enough senjutsu chakra to truly harness Sage Mode as you said. Instead he used what he could create to start moulding other people into senjutsu-capable hosts.
 
Sages and Senjutsu (Knyght)

Knyght

The Collector
Sages and Senjutsu (Official Version)

Natural energy is the energy that is created from the air, water and earth of the world. It exists anywhere and everywhere and is constantly circulating throughout the planet as a part of nature itself.

Senjutsu is the art of mixing natural energy with physical and spiritual energy to create more powerful chakra. By utilizing this chakra, one can empower themselves and the jutsu they wield.

They must sense natural energy by learning to remain perfectly still to stop disturbing the flow of nature with their presence. The less disturbance their presence causes then the easier to it becomes to perceive natural energy. And once they start sensing it, they become capable of actually seeing the flow of nature around them

After sensing it, they absorb it into their body through the skin and then balance it with their physical and spiritual energy. If they draw in too little natural energy then they cannot produce senjutsu chakra. If they draw in too much natural energy, it kills them. It is impossible for someone to move while gathering natural energy because it disturbs the flow of energy and makes it impossible to balance.

To learn senjutsu, one must possess enormous chakra levels to withstand the presence of natural energy within their body without being overwhelmed. In itself, the energy is far more powerful than the energy produced by living beings which causes it to mutate the body and turn them to stone as they become a part of the world itself.

Only by achieving balance between natural energy and their internal energies can one create senjutsu chakra. Those who use this art are called Sages.

And the first of them was the Sage of Six Paths himself who wielded this art, unravelled its mysteries and taught it to both humans and animals. His mother, the Rabbit Goddess, was capable of manipulating the natural energy of the entire world to direct it at her pleasure but never actually learned to take it into herself. Hence why her son was the one to be called a sage.

Sage Mode

Sage Mode is the state achieved when a sage empowers themselves with senjutsu chakra. The senjutsu chakra circulates throughout the entire body through their chakra pathways and dramatically increases all of their physical capabilities. Their strength, speed, stamina, reflexes, senses healing and durability all gain a significant boost to make physical superior to most other human beings. Senjutsu chakra strengthens every aspect of their ninjutsu, genjutsu, and taijutsu as well.

The individual becomes so attuned to nature that they feel as if they have become one with it. Any latent chakra sensing capability that they have is amplified by senjutsu chakra and attuned to the natural energy around them. As a result, their chakra sensitivity is beyond the ability of all but the most skilled of sensors.

Being able to draw natural energy into themselves also means that they can manipulate the natural energy around them as well. They can use it as an extension of their own bodies, infuse it into their surroundings or interfering with it to control the terrain or atmosphere.

Sage Mode can only be maintained for a limited amount of time. The senjutsu chakra used to enter that state is constantly being used to activate the body beyond ordinary human limits, so even doing nothing would eventually cause it to be released. And more chakra used for jutsu then the faster it runs out.

However it is possible to extend or re-enter Sage Mode it by collecting more natural energy and continuing it to mix it with their internal energies. Typically, a sage doesn’t mix natural energy with the total sum of the physical and spiritual energy and instead only use as much as they can safely keep in the balance. So they would be able to enter Sage Mode consecutively several times over before being in danger of running out of chakra unless pushed to extremes.

The more skilled one becomes at senjutsu then the more natural energy they can balance with their internal energies, the more senjutsu chakra can be created and the longer Sage Mode can be maintained. Moreover, their body becomes more efficient at utilizing senjutsu chakra over time which causes it to be used up at a slower rate and further increases the time limit.

Unfortunately, the problem with extending Sage Mode is that it requires the sage to temporarily remain still to gather more natural energy which can be a critical weakness on the battlefield. Balancing natural energy while moving is considered impossible as one cannot split their attention between both at the same time. With experience, they can drastically shorten how long this takes and can even do this successfully during a fight but it is nevertheless a potential vulnerability.

To circumvent this weakness, sages would fuse with a summon animal capable of using natural energy who would gather it on their behalf to provide them with an inexhaustible source while staying on the move. This also takes advantage of the increased rate of recovery provided by senjutsu as it continually replenishes their physical and mental energy and thus allows them to continue using Sage Mode for even longer. This doesn’t mean that Sage Mode cannot run out but by managing their stamina well, the sage can keep it going for long periods of time.

Alternatively, shadow clones are capable of gathering natural energy and then transferring that to their creator when dispelled. So if the sage has ran out of senjutsu chakra, dispelled a shadow clone which not only restore their chakra but allow them to re-enter Sage Mode once more. But the concentration required to maintain shadow clones who are gathering natural energy mean that only a couple of them can be used at once.

The appearance that one takes when they enter Sage Mode depends on whether they can perfectly balance natural energy. If they can’t, then they will take on inhuman physical attributes that turn them into something between man and beast. If they can, they will only gain markings on their face and altered eyes as a reflection of that mastery.

Three Sage Regions

There are three regions of the continent that host the only animal tribes capable of using senjutsu: the toads of Mount Myoboku, the snakes of Ryuichi Cave and the slugs of Shikkotsu Forest. They first learned the art from the Sage of Six Paths and carried his teachings down through the ages to share among their kind.

Boasting unusual terrain and diverse wildlife, it's said that these regions are usually only found by those who aren't trying to get there in the first place. These regions generate unusually high concentrations of natural energy which is part of what attracted these animal tribes to make their home there. As such, they are sensitive to its presence and have used it to practice senjutsu for centuries.

Each tribe is able to teach that senjutsu to their chosen summoners and among those who know of this, it is the most reliable means of becoming a sage. By signing a contract in blood, the summoner gains a unique connection with the animals which changes the way that natural energy affects their body to reflect it.

The animals’ ability to fuse with their summoners to gather natural energy on their behalf and maintain Sage Mode almost indefinitely. Moreover, their centuries of knowledge aid in their learning and each tribe teaches its own style of senjutsu.

Gamamaru of Mount Myoboku, Hakuja of Ryuuchi Cave and Katsuyu of Shikkotsu Forest were the animals who were taught senjutsu by the Sage of Six Paths. They have lived for a millennia as the power of senjutsu chakra lengthened their lives far beyond their usual limits.

Toad Senjutsu

The toads focus on teaching their summoners to meditate and achieve oneness with the natural world to sense and absorb draw natural energy, typically making their training the slowest of the three animal tribes. It is taught by the Two Great Sage Toads, Fukasaku and Shima, who are the only toads to have learned from Gamamaru.

However their mountain produces a special liquid known as toad oil which attracts natural energy like a magnet and provides a shortcut to sensing and controlling it. By rubbing the oil into a person’s skin, the natural energy is automatically drawn into their body regardless of their will. However this carries a risk in that they can easily be overwhelmed by the energy before they learn control and transform into a toad. Fortunately the toads possess a stick that repels natural energy and is able to expel it from the body when struck. Toad oil only exists on the mountain because of its unique atmosphere and rapidly evaporates if taken elsewhere.

Toads teach their sages a fighting style that they called the Frog Kata. It uses the natural energy around them as an extension of their own body, increasing the range of their blows in a way that can’t be detected or predicted.

Snake Senjutsu

The snakes injects natural energy into their summoner with their fangs which forces their body to adapt to it or die. If they survive, they are taught how to sense and absorb natural energy themselves.

Orochimaru was an aspiring sage who survived being injected by natural energy. However while he learned to absorb enough natural energy to generate some senjutsu chakra, the amount he could create wasn’t enough for him to utilise Sage Mode. His research into the cursed seals.

Snakes teach their sages to bring the environment around them to life and control it as if it were an living organism, shifting and reshaping itself according to their will, turning the terrain to their advantage to help them fight and travel.

Slug Senjutsu

The slugs encapsulates their summoner inside themselves and forces it to slowly accept natural energy in their body. As long as they survive this slow process, they are taught how to sense and absorb natural energy. It is taught by the Grand Slug Sage, Katsuyu.

While the slug tribe is in fact a single entity divided into many clones, only those who travel to the Shikkotsu Forest to meet with the core of Katsuyu’s being are given the opportunity to learn senjutsu.

Slugs teach their sages to wield the natural energy around them like a shield. Without a body meant for fighting, they use it to disrupt living organisms that mean to attack them by deflecting incoming attacks away from themselves or gather and harden it to protect them outright. Combined with the inherent durability of Sage Mode, there are few things a Slug Sage cannot endure.

Human Senjutsu

Humans have been known to learn senjutsu themselves. The partnership with the animal tribes is merely the most common means of learning the uncommon art.

Sage Mode works in the same way as they do for summoners, providing the same physical enhancements and more powerful jutsu. The difference is that without the blood ties between man and animal, the physical mutations that an individual experiences doesn’t change them into anything like an animal themselves. Instead each mutation is unique to the individual as they adopt all manner of shapes that reflect the many shapes that can appear in the natural world. And when one perfectly balances natural energy instead of the physical changes, the mark of a true sage is the symbol of enlightenment over their temple and eyes of gold.

The majority of those who learn senjutsu themselves are not shinobi but monks. Having devoted their lives to peace, spending days in meditation and contemplating the nature of the world around them, some manage to perceive the flow of nature and take it into themselves. Some small sects have devoted themselves to the art and they have been individual monks who have even secluded themselves in the most remote regions of the world to become one with nature. A few of these have even been said to have lived for centuries themselves as human too benefit from the life-extending benefits of senjutsu.

Nevertheless they have been individual shinobi who have discovered the art for themselves over the ages. There was even a clan of shinobi who modified their bodies to passively absorb natural energy and instinctively generate senjutsu chakra without the danger of turning to stone. Originally they were bound to the snake tribe of Ryuuchi Cave but once that partnership was severed, they adapted to the changes in their abilities and consciously learned to transform their bodies in multiple ways and labelled the ability Sage Transformation

Known Sages

Otsutsuki Ashura - The second son of the Sage of Six Paths who discovered that his true talent lay in senjutsu and, even before being gifted with his father’s power as his successor, was capable of manipulating nature in ways that almost no-one else had ever achieved since his passing.

Senju Hashirama - He was one of the most powerful practitioners of human senjutsu. His Wood Release allows him create life and trees which granted him an innate connection to nature unlike anything shared by others. Once he learned of the existence of senjutsu, he trained himself in the art and was able to perfectly balance natural energy with his immense internal energies.

Jiraiya - He was known as the Toad Sage though his control over senjutsu was imperfect. He never learned to absorb natural energy without the use of toad oil and so he only ever used Sage Mode by first summoning the Two Great Sage Toads from Mount Myoboku.

Namikaze Minato - He learned senjutsu and was capable of perfectly balancing natural energy unlike his mentor but he found it incompatible with his fighting style. He couldn’t enter Sage Mode quickly, maintain it for long or even create a great amount of senjutsu chakra. He had intended to truly master the art over time but his life was cut short before he could.

Yakushi Kabuto - He used Juugo’s genes to grant himself Sage Transformation and then learned senjutsu from the White Snake Sage at Ryuuchi Cave, making him a blend of two different types of senjutsu with a very strong resemblance to snakes.

Uzumaki Naruto - He trained in senjutsu after Jiraiya’s passing and proved himself far more gifted than his mentor in the art. He learned how to sense and absorb natural energy far sooner, he could create much more senjutsu chakra and he could perfectly balance natural energy with his internal energies. He was one of the most gifted sages to grace Mount Myoboku and only grew more powerful over time, even overcoming his inability to fuse with Fukasaku and Shima because of his Jinchuuriki status. Naruto went further than most and unlocked the next level of senjutsu that even the sage animals couldn’t use it.
 
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Altered Nova

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I think that humans probably don't turn into animals when overloaded on nature energy unless they've contracted with one of the sage animal tribes. I think an uncontracted human sage would probably look similar to how Kaguya, Madara and Obito (as the ten-tail jinchuuriki) and Hagoromo looked - with pale skin and horns, like an oni. Which would explain why Juugo and cursed seal users transform to look like corrupted versions of that appearance (dark-skinned and demonic).
 

Knyght

The Collector
RE: The Naruversity

So a less evil looking version of the cursed seal transformation? With Juugo and his 'clones' taking on a darker appearance because of their cursed nature. Hmm.
 

Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

Human sages transforming into Oni-like beings makes more sense to me than them turning into an animal. I mean, what animal does a sage that isn't contracted to an animal clan turn into? A random one? That would be really weird.

And it would also explain why Hagoromo and Kaguya look like that, they're just permanently in Sage Mode 'cause they're so badass.
 

Knyght

The Collector
RE: The Naruversity

Figured it was an alien thing but yeah, explains it the similarities. Changes already made.

Any thoughts on the Slug Senjutsu? I was trying to go for something in-between the toads and snakes in how they teach that took advantage of what we've seen them do.

And the Serpent Kata? My excuse for Kabuto not using it was simply that he moved on to other things before learning it and his senjutsu chakra scalpels are just as effective anyway.

I'm also trying to break down what the exact differences between Sage Mode and Sage Transformation should be. Especially a mastered Sage Transformation instead of uncontrolled version we see in canon, bar Mitsuki.
 

Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

Learning slug Senjutsu sounds appropriately terrifying to me. Now I'm wondering why Tsunade never learned Senjutsu.

Serpent Kata is kind of meh to me, but I can't think of anything better. Snakes don't exactly give us a ton of material to work with.

I don't think there really is a difference (aside from how the nature energy is gathered) between normal Senjutsu and Sage Transformation. Sage Transformation is a genetic ability that automatically and involuntarily gathers nature energy for the user while protecting them from most of the negative side effects of overdosing on it. It doesn't actually seem to fundamentally change *how* one can use that nature energy. I think the differences we do see are all explained by the fact that most users of Sage Transformation don't actually know how to balance nature energy with their own chakra, so they mutate more and get less of a physical boost from it.

Think about it. We know that nature energy causes physical mutation in humans if the user can't properly balance it. Jiraiya partially transformed into a toad because he couldn't balance it quite right. Kabuto partially transformed into a snake/dragon by intentionally unbalancing his senjutsu chakra just a bit as a combat strategy. Following this logic, Juugo transforms wildly all the time, because his senjutsu chakra is completely unbalanced.

This would also be why Juugo is so much weaker than a proper sage - you only get the physical enhancements of Sage Mode if you can balance the nature energy.

The reason we don't ever see Sages physically transform and shapeshift their bodies to the same extremes as Juugo does is because intentionally unbalancing their senjutsu chakra to that degree would mean giving up the physical enhancements of Sage Mode (so probably not worth the tradeoff) and create the risk that they might push it too far and turn to stone - a risk Juugo doesn't have to worry about because of his bloodline/curse.

I think that Juugo could theoretically learn how to control his rages and become a proper sage like Kabuto if someone taught him how to sense nature energy and balance his senjutsu chakra.
 

Knyght

The Collector
RE: The Naruversity

Now I'm seeing Juugo's initial state where markings start appearing as when he has enough natural to start making physical changes, his partial transformation when he has some more and focuses it in specific body parts, and level 2 when he reaches his total capacity for natural energy which would kill anyone else.

Do you think that Juugo as a true sage would still carry any physical mutations or would he only have the markings like Naruto until he consciously taps into his mutations?
 

Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

I think that Juugo as a true sage would have to consciously tap into his mutations, and doing so would come with a tradeoff. The more he mutates, the less physical enhancement he gets from sage mode.

Although he might be able to find a middle ground by using only partial transformations in specific body parts while still maintaining an imperfect sage mode in most of his body - Jiraiya did something like that during his fight against Pain when he transformed only his feet and hands into frog limbs in order to increase his jumping and climbing ability.
 

nixofcyzerra

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RE: The Naruversity

I'm not sure Juugo's body or chakra network is up to the task of balancing his own chakra with the constant influx of natural energy.
 

Knyght

The Collector
RE: The Naruversity

One part of controlling natural energy is how it enters and leaves the body so he could learn to release the excess or prevent any more from entering him at all.
 

Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

That is a fair point. It probably would be harder to balance nature energy with one's chakra when one's body is constantly and involuntarily absorbing more of it. He'd probably have to keep adjusting the ratio every few minutes, and consciously expelling any extra when he isn't able to burn it off. But hey, Kabuto seemed to manage it just fine.
 

da_fox2279

California Crackpot
RE: The Naruversity

Altered Nova said:
That is a fair point. It probably would be harder to balance nature energy with one's chakra when one's body is constantly and involuntarily absorbing more of it. He'd probably have to keep adjusting the ratio every few minutes, and consciously expelling any extra when he isn't able to burn it off. But hey, Kabuto seemed to manage it just fine.
Kabuto was a medic-nin, though. Years of training to keep his chakra steady. Probably on top of some natural talent at chakra control. Juugo may have the natural control, but I doubt he's up to the levels medics are required.
 
Mission Ranks (Altered Nova)

Altered Nova

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Here's a teaser for the Ninja Ranks entry I'm still working on:

Mission Ranks

In the organised society of the villages, ninja are given missions depending on their rank. The missions are categorised in five ranks, based on the mission's possible danger or level of importance.

D-rank: Risk-free missions which involve performing manual labor and other simple tasks. Examples include: painting a house, delivering packages, babysitting a child, working on a farm, finding a lost pet.

As few civilians can afford to hire ninja to perform their household chores, D-rank missions are usually subsidized by the village and reserved exclusively for genin.

C-rank: Low-risk missions which may involve fighting or other mild danger, but never combat against other ninja. Examples include: guarding clients against common highwaymen, eliminating or capturing common bandits or thieves, background investigations, disaster relief, capturing or suppressing wild animals.

C-rank missions require a commander of at least chuunin rank, although genin frequently participate in them.

B-rank: Dangerous missions with a significant risk of combat with other ninja. Examples include: guarding important clients such as nobles and politicians, espionage, military law enforcement, prison security, border patrol.

B-rank missions are usually assigned to experienced chuunin.

A-rank: Extremely dangerous missions with a high risk of conflict with enemy ninja. A-rank missions frequently involve sensitive matters pertaining to village security. Any mission which requires travelling to a nation currently at war with the village is automatically assigned this rank or higher. Examples include: sabotaging foreign infrastructure, infiltrating other ninja villages, hunting missing-nin, guarding a village leader or head of state, suppressing ninja forces.

A-rank missions require a commander of jounin rank.

S-rank: Extraordinarily dangerous missions that are only assigned to the most elite of shinobi. S-rank missions usually concern state level confidential matters. The outcome of an S-rank mission can potentially turn the tide of a war, make or break the prosperity of a village, or even determine the fate of an entire nation. Examples include: commanding of armies, conquest of a fortified city or military base, assassination of a village leader or head of state, the theft of secret jutsu or powerful artifacts, capturing or defeating a bijuu or jinchuuriki.
 

Knyght

The Collector
RE: The Naruversity

What rank would a mission that involves travelling to an unallied nation which isn't actually at war with them fall under?
 

Altered Nova

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RE: The Naruversity

Up to the discretion of the Kage assigning the mission, depending on how powerful the ninja village of the unallied nation is and what the consequences of getting caught would by them would be.

If their village is strong and/or your ninja are up to something underhanded like trying to steal a bloodline, getting caught would probably mean war, or at least a major diplomatic incident with your nation paying out reparations and/or getting sanctioned. Your ninja are also probably going to die. So, A-rank for that mission, possibly even S-rank.

If their village is weak and/or your ninja are doing something relatively innocent (like, I dunno, finding a missing person or retrieving stolen property), getting caught would probably just mean your ninja getting getting interrogated and then escorted back across the border, and their Kage demanding compensation from yours. So B-rank for that mission.
 
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